Come With Us

Isn't this lineart adorable???
It's by musicfreak13 and I'm really sorry to use her lineart as a test piece X]
So obviously this isn't my typical style... but after I colored Orbit It was so messy/muddy that I wanted to try out something more crisp and simple... nothing involving worrying about light sources or pixeling or realism vs anime or underwater effects X]
So here's the result of that XD
'Twas a break piece, but I hope y'all enjoy~
Comments are welcome, Critiques are thoroughly encouraged

Edit: Oh o.o There was a reason why Rin has shadows on her left and Len has shadows on his right- I was going to make this into a complexish piece at first, but then I realized that the style wouldn't highlight the lines very well...so originally, I thought of this as Rin and Len pulling you through the light..so the light was going to be coming from that little target behind them and I was going to fill in secondary light later, but scratch that I suppose X]

Edit2: Felt guilty about skimping in the original so I added more layers >.< i kinda like vectoring... (O.O forgot to note- all of this is vectored except the eyes and the background...)